dissabte, 7 de març del 2009

FAIRY TALE

I lost the redaction of the fairy tale and put this redaction.

Smith’s family

One evening, Mr and Mrs Smith were watching television at home. Suddenly, they thought that they had to made a list of all things that wanted.
Mr Smith said that journalist of the one that he had wanted to be a better and therefore, he wanted many objects: a magic mp3, a radio that can tune on people’s thoughts, a digital watch which tells you how many years you have left to live, a pocket calculator that makes decisions for you, a suit that makes you, invisible and supersonic training shoes.
Then Mrs Smith said that she wanted to be a politician and afterwards a feminist princess. After saying all this, they went to the bedroom.
The next day, got up and continuing heards a small journalist and a small politician.
A year later they achieved their goal. They used to live in a flat, but now they live in a house.
Int the end, they got what they wanted to be.

2 comentaris:

carmina ha dit...

I appreciate your interest in being such a responsible student!
Please correct mistakes IN CAPITAL LETTERS:

I lost the COMPOSITION of the fairy tale and UPLOADED THIS ONE.

Smith’s family

they thought that they had to maKe

Mr Smith said that journalist ------------- wanted


The next day, THEY got up got what they wanted to be.

carmina ha dit...

You deserve a B mark for the whole